[On the top of the first panel it says "The Staring Contest", bastard scanner cut it off -_-]
mares and Gentlecolts, I present to you my very first Pony related Comic! XD, I could think of no better pony for this than Derpy ^^ , Her face gets more strained and contorted with every minute that passes, Desperately trying to keep her eyes open in order to win the staring contest........with a mirror
ALSO FIC WRITERS GET YOUR PENS OUT, THIS IS A STORY SO FUCKIN DEPRESSINGLY SAD IT WIPES IT'S ASS ON "MY LITTLE DASHIE", "SAYING GOODBYE" AND ALL THE REST!!!!!AND IT'S GOING ON RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU!!!! [This stories ass is literally shitting so much feeling and sentiment!!!!] Its a story called "The painting of the muffin family in derpy's house that is haunted for some reason", The gist of it goes like this [Get your kleenex out] :
While Derpy was competing against the mirror, She had no clue what was going on in the painting on the wall behind her, the painting of the muffin family, Mr Cinnamon muffin, Mrs Regular muffin, And baby blueberry Muffin.....
Baby Blueberry muffin asked her mother "Why am I a blueberry muffin?", Mrs Regular muffin replied "I had an affair, Mr cinnamon muffin is not your father, The news was all too much for Mr Cinnamon Muffin, so he jumped out of the painting and died!!!!
The End
Damn I'm such a visionary.......
My little pony friendship is magic belongs to Lauren Faust and Hasbro, Comic belongs to me! ;]
Why I´m not suprised...maybe beacuse it´s Derpy? At least she didn´t tried to beat fishes who can hold breath longer.
I can confirm this is actually very disturbing and depressing, essentially reflecting her madness in unbelievably grotesque sense for detail. After all, ALL your art is following this rule.
I couldn't think of any other pony more fitting than Derpy for this comic ;] The fish idea is a good one but the staring contest with a mirror one doesn't result in death XD
thank you mate!, I listen to a lot of death metal when I draw these so I suppose the aggressive vibes soak into the page, as well as the gritty graphic novel style XD
I redraw them loads of times before I get the right look XD [I always start with the eyes then build the features around them], The fifth panel was a pain in the arse -_-
Seriously, My little Dashie has nothing on this ._., I was tearing up like a little girl when typing the story out
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